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Wednesday, October 28, 2009

ROGUE SEVEN - REBORN

Okeh kali nie aku nk cte psl aku ade wat satu cte nie mse form 3


Tp terbantut pas abes PMR


Tataw la npe tp rase cm mls gile nk teruskn..Tp insyaAllah aku teruskn la cte nie pas SPM nie.


Act dah 3 chpter aku wat tp aku post satu2 je lah sbb pnjang gile..Pape pn aku nk kne komen dr korang dlu yaa



ROGUE SEVEN


PROLOGUE


The night was cold in the dark. It was winter in December. The night was perfect, the huge cloud covering them from the light that was bounded by the moon like an enormous grey shelter, turning the place into the evil darkness. Shallow water by the river displayed the intensify view of the moon as the massive shelter move apart and displayed the moon. Yet tall dark trees appeared at each every corner on the ground made the environment become more constant between the attractiveness and sinister atmosphere. A lone man standing on the ground looked over the moonlight. That night was a full moon and it was a beautiful scene to have a moment of time with the moonlight. Beautiful enough to make a person vulnerable from any danger for a moment. He wasn't alone that night as he thought. In the dark river, a man with shaggy green hair with his face covered with the dark green paint as camouflage matched to the dark forest rose from the water. His sharp pale blue eye was focusing on the lone man for a long time from the back without his attention.


"Two, get up" he said softly that the lone man can't hear it. Another man with the same appeal rose from the dark water. "Take him down!" he continued. The other man pulled his head down in the water and swam to the lone man which was standing nearly one feet from the river. As the other man rose from the water his body was revealed. His hair wasn't shaggy but he wore a ghillie suit, a shaggy camouflage that was suitable to blending them in the scrubby trees and prairie grass which was located up on the hill in front of them. He walked slowly almost motionless towards the lone man. As he reached nearly one feet behind the lone man, he held his breath and grabbed the lone man by the face, pulled him into the water, drowning him and dropped him in the water so the body become harder to spot. They climbed the hill. On the top of the hill was their final stop after two hours fighting their way to the location. The hill was the highest point in the area which is good location for viewing the lower ground. Eventually they were snipers from a classified anti-terrorist team known as R.O.G.U.E or Radical Operation Guerrilla Unit Exterminator and their task was to observe a location and provide supports to the upcoming Rogues.

6 comments:

nadhrh said...

pehhh,gerek arh story kaw.

perfct tense and grammar!


T-T

kudos!

Fath said...

Haha
Thx!

muhamad lahmzahu said...

mantab arh english
tapi storyline dye agak mendatar..
anyway, gud job!

Fath said...

Thx haha
Laa mmg la mendatar
Sbb aslnyr nie nk wat novel tros taw
Tuh yg slow je cte
Awl2 kasi slow2 la best
Saspen! haha

kulop said...

yo,dont post out everthin in this blog..people outhere alwys take for granted of ur effort..

Fath said...

oh yaa
Thx fr reminding

Luckily i didnt post the next one


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